The Couple v0.2alpha

Alpha 2.

Images for all “first” days are done, for the “Fun”-Path day two is likewise done.

As with the last version, I did not disable playing further – most of the prologue is done text wise. Although the last days I started a “soft-dom” path, a split of from the “hard-dom” path. This one only goes till day 6, so not finished (text wise).

As mentioned in the blog, I started a “history” and a “diary” for the two MC.
These are up to date with the images – but are not done for the following days yet.

Ideas for the first chapter are also playable – this is at most a half of one path.

File wise the Cybele/Attis story and one follow up scene is also included – but not reachable, since I did not define a call/jump.

Other things done from last version:
– added some background music
– added a flag for “piss/no-piss content”
– changed two “orgies”
– image content now: about 1080 images (DAZ-renders)
– word content now: ~150000 words – hard to count, or too lazy to write a script…


Comments

4 responses to “The Couple v0.2alpha”

  1. Saphfire Avatar
    Saphfire

    Hi,
    i have finished everything on the “fun path” now, and i mostly loved it.
    One thing that stood our really bad was the orgy day.
    Ani made it clear that he is an alpha, theirfore it makes no sense that
    he has to wear a chastity cage during the orgy. This and having to beg Ina to let him fuck other girls make him a sub, which he is not!
    This is the “Fun path” Fun for both especially when celebreting the end
    of the workshop. It´s no fun being humilated in front of the other participents.
    I hope you give what i wrote some thought, if not, well it´s your story.
    Greeting
    Saphfire

  2. Saphfire Avatar
    Saphfire

    oh i forgot: you used way to many renders on day 2, 100 would be more then enough, reuse them if you feel you need graphics.
    This is the second day for only one path. If you continue the final episode would have mayby 50000 renders, thats insane!

  3. Haha – you really don’t like the Chastity thing :-).
    I already changed two other paths… That is the “Fun” path – and they are supposed to both see this as “fun” and “shocking/teasing” the others.

    It is not supposed to Ani to be REALLY a sub… it is a game for them… well it is supposed to be.
    I guess it does not come across as such.

    I will look at it again…
    Don’t you think this sort of thing can also be fun at an event like that?
    That they are not able to “chuckle” behind closed doors that they could deceive others with their behaviour?

    This is the intro dialog to the scene:

    i “I am a little nervous…”
    a “Hu? Why?”
    i “Don’t know… all the people… naked… all the men want a piece of me…”
    i “You watch out for me… won’t you?”
    a “Yes love… I’ll protect them from you!”
    i “What?”
    a “Haha… love… you are the one beating up girls… kicking guys in the nuts… putting them into chastity…”

    (Which at this point never was Ani – that were other guys…)

    a “You make them lick your feet and ass… ”
    a “Haha… believe me… they are more afraid of you, then vice versa.”
    i “Haha… if you put it that way… haha… ”
    a “Yes sweetie… I have your back… always!”
    i “Hmmm… you know that you do not only have my back… you have my whole body… hahaha! Love you!”
    a “Ok… let’s do this!”
    i “Yea…”
    “…”
    i “Wait!”
    a “Hm?”
    i “Just a thought… would you… would you wear this?”
    a “A chastity device?”

    My thought was that it was “inclusive” that this is a “fun” thing for them.

    In your oppinion – will this NEVER be able to be a fun thing? Or did I just not make it clear enough?

    (In my thinking a REAL alpha stands above the judgement of others – and has no qualm playing another role…)

  4. Regarding the images…

    I know.
    I got carried away… and still new to this VN thing.
    I have to find a healthy in between…

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